ANC PASSAGE MASTER 12/1

The paragraph that i think is very interesting and very funny is when Carl Ray is coming to stay with the Finney family and every body is going crazy trying to get every thing out of tommy’s room, who is only four years old, and put all new stuff for Carl Ray who is seventeen.

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4 Responses to “ANC PASSAGE MASTER 12/1”

  1.   Kit Says:
    December 2nd, 2006 at 12:46 am

    I hope you continue to enjoy your book. It is very cool that your teacher has you blog your response!

  2.   Ms. Fink Says:
    December 2nd, 2006 at 10:28 am

    I agree that that is a funny part. You could have put more description about how everyone was going crazy getting ready for Carl Ray’s visit. I like how you point out that the room Carl Ray is going to use is decorated for a 4 year old and Carl Ray is a teenager. You have a few capitalization errors that you need to be careful about.

  3.   adriang Says:
    December 4th, 2006 at 12:21 pm

    I think that was was a good passage.But i think that there are better passages to pick. But ver all i think that was a great one.

  4.   samanthabl Says:
    December 4th, 2006 at 2:43 pm

    Hey! mimi think a very intersing passage you picked.
    I think you should had decribed the scene more. The passage I picked is the on ethat tells why she has to write a summer jounral. Also the passage that decribes each of the charters in the book.