http://darienl.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/01/anc-passage-master-121/ Just another Learnerblogs.org weblog Tue, 02 Dec 2008 21:03:06 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=wordpress-mu-1.2.5 http://darienl.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/01/anc-passage-master-121/#comment-6 samanthabl Mon, 04 Dec 2006 18:43:25 +0000 http://darienl.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/01/anc-passage-master-121/#comment-6 Hey! mimi think a very intersing passage you picked. I think you should had decribed the scene more. The passage I picked is the on ethat tells why she has to write a summer jounral. Also the passage that decribes each of the charters in the book. Hey! mimi think a very intersing passage you picked.
I think you should had decribed the scene more. The passage I picked is the on ethat tells why she has to write a summer jounral. Also the passage that decribes each of the charters in the book.

]]> http://darienl.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/01/anc-passage-master-121/#comment-5 adriang Mon, 04 Dec 2006 16:21:02 +0000 http://darienl.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/01/anc-passage-master-121/#comment-5 I think that was was a good passage.But i think that there are better passages to pick. But ver all i think that was a great one. I think that was was a good passage.But i think that there are better passages to pick. But ver all i think that was a great one.

]]> http://darienl.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/01/anc-passage-master-121/#comment-4 Ms. Fink Sat, 02 Dec 2006 14:28:48 +0000 http://darienl.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/01/anc-passage-master-121/#comment-4 I agree that that is a funny part. You could have put more description about how everyone was going crazy getting ready for Carl Ray's visit. I like how you point out that the room Carl Ray is going to use is decorated for a 4 year old and Carl Ray is a teenager. You have a few capitalization errors that you need to be careful about. I agree that that is a funny part. You could have put more description about how everyone was going crazy getting ready for Carl Ray’s visit. I like how you point out that the room Carl Ray is going to use is decorated for a 4 year old and Carl Ray is a teenager. You have a few capitalization errors that you need to be careful about.

]]> http://darienl.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/01/anc-passage-master-121/#comment-3 Kit Sat, 02 Dec 2006 04:46:26 +0000 http://darienl.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/01/anc-passage-master-121/#comment-3 I hope you continue to enjoy your book. It is very cool that your teacher has you blog your response! I hope you continue to enjoy your book. It is very cool that your teacher has you blog your response!

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